![]() “I just wanna run to the other end as fast as I can.” “How so?” she asked, smiling up at him, enjoying the lack of stress tension in his face. “That’s tempting,” he said, gesturing to a long straightaway on the trail before them. She’d seen them before on other outings, but she wasn’t tired of them yet! ![]() The ‘squirrels’, in particular, were enchanting and she wasted a lot of time observing a family of them scampering over their heads. They were like Teler’s, but they smelled different, the patterns were different, and certainly the fauna were very different. But he of all people needed a day to rest now, and he seemed more obliging towards her than usual since her pregnancy revelation, so it hadn’t been nearly as hard as she’d expected to persuade him that ‘in her medical and personal, completely 100% biased opinion’, they needed to go on a walk in the woods. There were so many things that needed his attention, especially at this late date, and he could easily have cited those as more important. She was grateful, even though it had been her own recommendation. The Atlas was due to launch from Earth the next day Shiro had mandated a final day of leave for everyone going on the hunt for Honerva, and then spent it himself with Elslince in the gorgeous highlands of Colorado, not too far from Galaxy Garrison and not too close either. : )įorest date music: All Mine by ONE OK ROCK My sketchy rewrite is not big enough to threaten the entire multiverse. The art is still great, the action is pretty good, the actors did their best, but none of it works emotionally for me past E2 and especially not how they arrived at and resolved the ending. ![]() Because they had no time left in the episodes or the plotwriting sessions. Just… “it’s over now, everyone accept it”. Day 47 was one of the best ‘comedy filler’ episodes in the whole show, but it can’t save the rest of it, where hardly anyone got development time, and those that did had hardly any payoff. So in S8, they… did what they did in S8, and while technically it’s bigger, it’s got much less of an emotional punch because the whole time I’m just exasperated with the plot drunkenly careening from one ridiculous situation to the next, and how bad the pacing is. They wanted to do something bigger than S6’s multi-verse threatening finale, but did they miss the part where S6’s biggest emotional moment was really the Shiro/Keith fight? Lotor’s breakdown and the sacrifice of the Castle of Lions were also important but they are not the parts I think of first when I think of S6. SPOILERS AHEAD still obviouslyĪlso, rant ahead: The main problems with S8’s writing are power creep, insufficient time/effort expended in planning, and a misplaced desire to subvert expectations. The penultimate chapter approaches, wut? I let the disappointment of S8 digest long enough (and got over a really busy work period/sickness) to concoct a pleasant enough alternate reality.
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